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Submitted: November 7, 2012
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Model:iPhone 4
Shutter Speed:1/120 second
Aperture:F/2.8
Focal Length:4 mm
ISO Speed:80
Date Taken:Nov 7, 2012, 10:46:49 PM
Software:Microsoft Windows Photo Viewer 6.1.7600.16385

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Body...?by *Tollador

Traditional Art / Drawings / People

An attempt at proportions.. x.x
Her head looks huge.. x.x
I can't draw hands.
And I certainly don't know/don't want to know what a vag looks like. LOLOL.

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~AquiIon Nov 8, 2012

oooh, good job~
You did the anatomy really well for someone who isn't actually a girl lD
hm, maybe with the profile... the chest is usually sloped, but flatter near the neck
and the torso is wider near the chest (to accommodate the ribcage) and thinner in the stomach~
but you did a great job!~

*Tollador Nov 8, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

b-but what if she's fat?!

~AquiIon Nov 9, 2012

LOL GOOD POINT XD
b-but I guess... even if she's fat, it still need to be a bit wider under her boobs, otherwise she has no lungs~
(like a mermaid...? lD)

*Tollador Nov 9, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

MAYBE SHE IS?!
huhuhuu.... Shh.
idk.
/runs away
THANK YOU LPPPPPPPPPPPPpppppppppppppppppp
/fades off into the distance

*TellyShishi Nov 8, 2012

Lol nope, you don't wanna know xD

Sowwy Tolly, Idk how to write a critique, and I'm by no means an expert on anatomy, so... x'D

I think you did pretty well though :3
The points I would suggest to you are:
_{-I think the shoulders should be a smidge wider (like if you were to draw normal straight hair on her head, the shoulders should be wider than the hair.)
-Her hips could be bigger to give her more shape? And then her thighs would taper slightly as it reaches the knees. (Like it would curve inwards)}
asdkjsf sowwy, I'm bad at explaining TwT

As for the profile view, I need to learn more about that myself, heh heh. <3

Best of luck on improving more, and great job I say! C:

*Tollador Nov 8, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Ahh, I see, I see..

*TellyShishi Nov 8, 2012

Heh heh wall of text.. hope it helps a little TuT <3

*Tollador Nov 8, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

It does, it does!
^__^

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